Not shabby. But the site is horrible for us 56k folk. Almost wasn't worth my horrendous wait.

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I have a sack.

heheh great website........Fade

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this shit is alive

Good job

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nice

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Nice man,I like it

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"There Is No Spoon"

Well i thought that you could have made it ryme. i think making poems ryme has more talent. Also, i thought u could have used some similies and metaphors. you kinda used metaphors, but not really. I also didnt like it when you said "Ah shit Im already sick of me, wheres a time machine when you need it. Probably next to my mxpx albums. "

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:bitch to Coren. I :bitch to Coren.

poems that dont rhyme have more effect.

and, hes just venting out his thoughts into a poetic form. i think its hella good.

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Fade does have good poetry. I'm not really into writing it. I'm into writing stories and TV/Movie scripts.

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