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Old 07-12-2005, 09:33 AM
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Originally Posted by thedevilf
I didnt know it was you, then they story would turn out worser than it turned out, jk ;)
WTF does that sentence mean?
Quote:
Originally Posted by thedevilf
I didnt know it was you,
That part's fine, then it all goes to hell.
Quote:
Originally Posted by thedevilf
then they story would turn out worser than it turned out
WTF?!?!
I'm going to assume that they=the and worser=worse, because worser isn't a word.

So now we get:
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Originally Posted by thedevilf EDITED
I didn't know it was you, then the story would turn out worse than it turned out, jk ;)
So let's see, you didn't know that someone was someone else (who are you talking to?), and then what the hell does the second part mean? I understand everything except the then, which doesn't make sense in the sentence. Does then = "but if I knew it was you, then?" Because that's the only thing I can think of that makes sense.

Also, you end your sentence with a comma. Unless you wanted "jk" to be part of the same sentence, in which you didn't end the sentence.

Grade: C. One can tell that you tried hard, so you get an A for effort, but it's just way too fucked up.
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