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Old 01-18-2004, 02:56 PM
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Kick ass. Only a few comments.

1. It looks too much like DBZ. And DBZ = gay.
2. Add at least a bit to the buildings. I know it'd take a long time to do a lot of detail work, but at least add windows or something. They're even all the same color.
3. Between the 2 songs, there's no music, and it seems empty. Either close the gap between the songs, or add some transitional music there.
4. It's fine how it is, but it'd be even better if instead of showing the text you actually said it. Not too hard to manage, either.

Other than that, cool.

By the way, since you're here, I need help using Swift 3D to make that sig with the rotating first letter. Thanks a bunch.
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